議論文寫作樣例:大學畢業後的生活地點

第十壹題

After they complete their university studies, some students live in their hometowns. Others live in different towns and cities. Which do you think is beterr? Give reasons for your answer.

試題分析

壹 條件: 大學畢業後的生活地點/有人回家鄉/有人去外地城鎮

二 要求: 兩種去向,哪種較好? 談談自己的看法與打算,需講出理由.

三 寫作分析: 本題是生活話題,有話可談,可以隨便發表高見. 生活與工作不可分,要壹道談.本題的寫法可采用常規框架:壹個觀點,幾條理由.談理由時,思路應該開闊,例如就業機會,工資收入,氣候,設施,親友等因素都可作為理由,每壹點都要例證充分.下筆前,要決定使用演繹法,還是推理法.

After they complete their univerrsity studies, some students preferr to live in their hometowns while others choose to live in different towns or cities. Everybody has his own reasons for his preference. After my graduation, I will go back and live in my home city. I have made this decision because of the following reasons.

Firstly, my home city is a big city that can offer a lot. There are plenty of opportunities for work, many big libraries for studies, several differrent musiums for visit, and numerous cinemas, theaters and centers for entertainment. When I go back there, I will have no difficulty in finding a job suitable for me and I can make use of all the facilities available there.

Secondly, if I go back to my home city, I can look after my parents. I take this into consideration because I am their only child and they are now weak and getting on in age. If I live in the same city with them, I can visit them very often and help them whenever it is necessary.

Thirdly, if I live in my home city, I will have a lot of friends, schoolmates and relatives to visit and to turn to for help when I need. Of course, I could get acquainted with many people and make many friends if I were to go to live in a strange place, but that takes time. If I go back to my home city, everybody will be waiting for me and I will be able to settle down comfortably without any trouble and waste of time.

In short, my choise is based on a careful consideration of my home city and my family. I think it is a better or sensible choice; in a certain sense, it is a must.

範文寫法說明:

文章的觀點是畢業後回家鄉,在第壹段表明.這樣開頭,屬演繹法的基本手法,下文必須是理由,直至結尾.為了清楚明了,文章分別用了四個邏輯詞firstly,secondly,thirdly and inshort 引導各段.

第壹段 引出主題,表明意向

第二段 家鄉是大城市及其優點

第三段 父母年邁體弱,自己是獨生子女

第四段 歸納和進壹步說明