議論文寫作樣例:老人與成人子女是否應生活在壹起

第九題

Some people say that older people should live with their adult children. Other people sy that they shouldn\’t. Which do you think is a good practice?

試題分析

壹 條件: 有人認為老人應與成人子女生活在壹起/有人認為不應壹道生活

二 要求: 談談哪種做法好

三 寫作分析: 本題為家常話題,人人都有話可說,關鍵是確立自己的觀點,思路要有條理.關於父母與子女的關系,發達國家的流行做法是子女成年之後另立門戶,中國人幾世同堂的局面也在改變,這是世界範圍內相同的發展趨勢.盡管如此,文章的觀點仍可任意選擇,只要言之有理,語言規範無誤,判卷著也會公正判分.文章的結構仍可采用三步式.

One of the topic in daily life is whether or not the older people should live with their adult children. My answer to the question is that it is betterr for them not to.

To begin with, adult children, like their parents, love indenpendence and freedom, but their parents may still take them as children and unintentionally interfere in their affairs. The situation will be worse if the adult children are already married. In this case, the children have already built a new and closed world and any outside interference may lead to conflicts. Besides, the new menbers of the family have no blood relations with the parents. When the relationship between the inlaws and the parents is not harmonious, the sons or daughters of the parents will be in a dificult position.

Secondly, people of different ages have different ways of life. The old people like a quiet, peaceful and regular life; whereas the young love noises, activities, and unrestrained enjoyment. If they live together, the old may feel that they are always disturbed and the young may feel that they are often handicapped.

Furthermore, people of different generations have differrent views and values. What is quite normal to the parents may seem to be old-fashioned or wrong to the children. When they live together, they may disagree on maters ranging from minor domestic matters to national and interrnational issues. Consequently, family life may be unpleasant or even unbearable to both the old and the young.

In short, if the parents and their adult children donot live together, both the old and the young can enjoy complete independence and freedom, live a life they like, and keep intact their affections for each other. Separate living does not mean separation of relations. The parents and their children can still visit and help each other if they stay in the same area.

範文寫法說明

文章在語義上分三部分,但包含五個自然段,目的是使人感到壹目了然.第壹段敘述作文題內容,然後直接擺出自己觀點,形成壹個主題句,之後的三段為三個理由.最後壹段起概括和說明的作用,同時文章收尾.在語言上,文章第壹段含主題句,之後四段分別以邏輯詞開頭,使文章條理清楚,層次分明.