寫作範文:朋友和家庭哪個影響大?

題目

Some people think that the family is the most important influence on young adults. Other people think that friends are hte most important influecce on yound adults. Which view do you agree with?yuse example to support your position.

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Did you call for help from your parents when you were in trouble?Did you confide in your friends when you were fret. when you are bothered,which do you contact first.It has been a controversial issue for decade whether the family is the most important influence on young adults or friends is .Some people firmly hold the point that parents are the first and most important teacher to young adults,whereas others frenquently claim that friends are the major influencing element to young adults\’growth. As far as I am concerned,parents have much more effect than friends on young adults.

parents are the persons who have fostered their sons and daugthers since baby to children and to adult,which is a very long period when they bring up a relation that young adults follow their parents\’ lead and educated by them.In general,parents have primary influence on young adults\’mentality and moral.Their abundant life experience can tell young adults what is right,what is wrong,where is a access,where is a trap,which can make young adults virtuous,,just,brave or insidious,evil,coward.As for me ,I witnessed the hardly course that my father became a manager of a international company.He worked hard to earn a living for family;He had to take care of my sickish mother;He studyed hard to promote himself.Father\’s spirit of conquering difficulties moved me deeply.So,today,I can bravely face any challenges and faults just like my father.In a word,father influence my attitude to living.

To understand the advantages of parents\’ influence on young adults,it is also important to see friends\’effect.When I was in school,I studied,worked and played with my friends and classmates.We helped each other to increase all kinds of knowledges and improve our study and work;We have simliar interests and habits;We often have some popular topics to disscuss.With the growth,I have more opportunities to contact friends and friends have more chances to effect my action.

Subsist on family within but friends without.Both of them influence young adults\’all life and either of them can\’t be neglected.In my opinion,being a virtuous,,just,brave person is more significative than being a person with success in study and work.

範文

Although friends make an impression on your life, they do not have the same influence that your family has. Nothing is as important to me as my family. From them, I learned everything that is important. I learned about trust, ambition, and love.

Your family is with you forever. They are not going to leave you because they find another daughter they like better. They are not going to leave you because they think you are too much trouble. A family is permanent, while friends come and go.

Your parents are your role models. They will encourage you to do your best, to push yourself, and to improve yourself. Friends want you to stay the same; they don\’t want you to be different. A family is ambitious for you. Friends are not.

Your family teaches you about love. A family\’s love is not judgmental. They love you for everything you are. Friends may love you because you have a new car or because you go out with them on Saturdays. A family loves you. Friends only like you.

Without my family, I wouldn\’t know what to do. I wouldn\’t feel as secure. I might not have the ambition to go to school. I probably would be afraid to love. My family is my greatest influence.