寫作範文壹篇(Important Invention)

2001-5-24 來源:

Invebtions such as eyeglasses and the sewing machine have had an important effect on our lives. Choose anotherr invention that you think is important.Give specific reasons for your choice.

試題分析

壹 條件: 發明物對人的生活已經產生了重要影響/例如眼鏡和縫紉機

二 要求: 除以上兩種,再選擇壹種自己認為有重要意義的發明物,用具體理由說明其重要性.

三 寫作分析: 本題是熟題,不愁無話可說,關鍵是選擇的物品是否好寫,例如是否掌握關鍵詞匯.本題應當用演繹法,首先說明自己的選擇,然後列出若幹理由,最好將其當成辯論性文章寫,力圖使對方信服.

As modern men, we are so used to so amny inventions that we do not realizehow much they have changed our lives. Eyeglasses and sewing machine are two examples. Another, and perhaps more obvious, example is television, which has so altered our way of life that we just cannot imagine what our life would be like without it.

Television has become our major means of entertainment. We no longer sing,dance, play musical instruments, or tell stories as we used to at home aftr supperr. We no longer turn on the radio so often. And we no longer go to cinemas and theaters unless there is something special. We can get our satisfaction at home if we just sit down and turn on the TV sets in our living rooms. We have become so addicted to our TV sets that we could feel miserable if wee were deprived of them.

Television has also become our chief means of obtaining information. Without going out, we can know what the weather will be like tomorrow, what is going on at home and abroad, and whether the current prices fo stocks are going up or down. Because of television, the world has become much smaller and things and people that used to be strangers are now familiar to us. Because of television, we are thousands of times more informed than our ancestors. Now, we depend so much on television for information that we will feel stupid if we do not watch TV for only a few days.

Television has become part of our lives. It has become a component part of the furniture of our homes and it is our companion wherever we go. With it,we are happy and informed; when we have troubles on our minds,we turn to it.Babies grow up with it and the old watch it until their last days. In short, whether it is interestingg or boring, whether it talks sense or nonsense,our life would be empty without it.

範文寫法說明:

為寫作方便,本文以電視機為題材,避開歷史之類的內容,直接談其對人類生活的影響.全文分四段,首段點題,其他自然圍繞主題,每段用主題句開頭,有例證支撐,使文章層次分明,有骨有肉.

第壹段: 引出主題,指出電視的重要性

第二段: 電視已成為主要的娛樂手段

第三段: 電視已成為壹種重要的信息來源

第四段: 電視已成為生活的壹部分—-壹種概括性的結尾